Your flesh,
so moist, so ripe,
sweetens as I press
my mouth close.
We cluster together,
twisted and contorted
into one.
We are swollen
and
juicy--
together.
I inhale your essence.
You give of yourself
freely.
We lay waste
to the skin,
to the seed,
to the fertilized bed
of
us--together--one.
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Ooh Ah! I think I was just outclassed! :-)
ReplyDeletesteamy magpie...smiles. all that from a tomato?
ReplyDeletetantalizing!
ReplyDeleteI am jealous, our tomatoes don't even hav fruit yet the season started so late!
ReplyDeleteaie chihuahua....that's one HOT post!
ReplyDeletevery hot magpie!
ReplyDeletegreat!!
Wonderful piece - erotic and romantic...lovely...bkm
ReplyDeleteit is amazing how a simple "fruit" can elicit such imagery and passion! good job
ReplyDeleteLots of passion in this piece!
ReplyDeleteErotic and tasty!! What a poem..
ReplyDeleteChristine
Mmmm, I can taste its juicy ripeness right now! You captured a moment of gustatory passion perfectly.
ReplyDeleteSteamy 'maters!
ReplyDeleteYour Magpie made me tingle all over!!!!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant! Rewading your poem there were moments when tomatoes where the last thing in my mind.. :)
ReplyDeleteTomatoes aren't kidding when they fall in love!
ReplyDeleteWow...can you write! woohoo!! Makes me wish I were a tomato! A very hot tomato!!!
ReplyDeletetomatoes are cool,
ReplyDeleteso are you.
lovely tale!