Sunday, July 11, 2010

MAGPIE TALES

Your flesh,
so moist, so ripe,
sweetens as I press
my mouth close.
We cluster together,
twisted and contorted
into one.
We are swollen
and
juicy--
together.
I inhale your essence.
You give of yourself
freely.
We lay waste
to the skin,
to the seed,
to the fertilized bed
of
us--together--one.


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17 comments:

  1. Ooh Ah! I think I was just outclassed! :-)

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  2. steamy magpie...smiles. all that from a tomato?

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  3. I am jealous, our tomatoes don't even hav fruit yet the season started so late!

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  4. aie chihuahua....that's one HOT post!

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  5. Wonderful piece - erotic and romantic...lovely...bkm

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  6. it is amazing how a simple "fruit" can elicit such imagery and passion! good job

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  7. Erotic and tasty!! What a poem..

    Christine

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  8. Mmmm, I can taste its juicy ripeness right now! You captured a moment of gustatory passion perfectly.

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  9. Your Magpie made me tingle all over!!!!

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  10. Brilliant! Rewading your poem there were moments when tomatoes where the last thing in my mind.. :)

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  11. Tomatoes aren't kidding when they fall in love!

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  12. Wow...can you write! woohoo!! Makes me wish I were a tomato! A very hot tomato!!!

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  13. tomatoes are cool,
    so are you.
    lovely tale!

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