Tuesday, May 4, 2010

MAGPIE TALES TUESDAY

LUMINOUS SPIRIT
PRIMORDIAL PURITY.
THE WIND
WHIPS
SOFTLY----
CARRIES THOUGHTS
SUCCINCTLY
TO:
A MEMORY.
FROZEN IN TIME,
ENCAPSULATED
IN GLASS.
SO FRAGILE;
SO FILLED WITH
RHYTHM.
REMINDS ME
OF:
WHEN.
OF:
WHY.
OF:
THEN.

11 comments:

  1. Your interpretation of Willow's photo prompt is 'spot on.' Loved it ........

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  2. nice. love how you layed this out...and it would sure stir the memories...great magpie!

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  3. Your poem is filled with rhythm. A lovely, reading out loud poem.

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  4. Love your 'new' banner.

    Joanny

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  5. A delectable delightful layer of words spoken so softly.

    Joanny

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  6. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/04/magpie-tale-the-list-of-magpie-tale-participants/

    mine is here
    thank you for reading it.

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  7. very impressive take!
    lovely poem!

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  8. Love the pure, luminousness of this, Teri!

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  9. Great poem. It has a really soft tone and calming feel I think. :)

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  10. Great poem. And you used my favorite word: then!

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  11. Dear Teri: AbSOULutely love this poem. Reminds me of those untouchable memories we try to hold onto; and are triggered when looking upon this glass menagerie. Excellent!

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